I think these kinds of posts would benefit from first person language instead of 'you'/'your' kind of generalizations because they are personal truths, not universal.
Advocates for clear, plain English recommend using the second person and not to shy away from imperatives. [0] It makes it easier to use the active voice as well as use less words. As a reader of this article, I don't take issue because I understand that the author isn't actually commanding me personally to do these things. It's just a sentence structure that conveys the information in a more readable way.