Also, I like what you've done with your inline comments. For my project we don't just use it for "improvements" but for suggestions, general comments, questions, etc...a whole range of taggable purposes for which you'd be highlighting that section in the legislation. So you'd highlight first, name a purpose second, then type your content.
We wouldn't collect any info on the visitor other than what they provide ("I don't want to see _____" would remove posts marked as such).
I read some of the blog post comments, and got the impression that there's not currently any live demo. — If in the future you publish something online, then, if you want to, please feel free to send me an email. I live far away in Sweden though, so I'd be mostly interested in the tech parts (rather than contributing). (Perhaps I could help you with usability testing though, or give you related feedback, if that'd be useful.)
Also, I like what you've done with your inline comments. For my project we don't just use it for "improvements" but for suggestions, general comments, questions, etc...a whole range of taggable purposes for which you'd be highlighting that section in the legislation. So you'd highlight first, name a purpose second, then type your content.
We wouldn't collect any info on the visitor other than what they provide ("I don't want to see _____" would remove posts marked as such).